Sunday, June 03, 2007

Like a smile.

Saw it again today
Second time
Raven black
Shiny clean
Changed lanes to follow
Sun bright reflection
Forgot sunglasses
Didn't change lanes
Brake lights flashed like a smile
Changed lanes for exit
Discs through the wheels
Curves of the fenders
Yellow eyes in mirror

6 comments:

Bpaul said...

Dude... verse? Right on, you go.

thisismarcus said...

Sounds like love... or sarcasm. The Chryslers with the old fashioned grill that I like are on the roads over here now too.

Shocho said...

It's love, not sarcasm. I know it's hard to tell from me.

(I'm holding up my left hand as I post this.)

Dave(id) said...

nice, now you need to do a haiku

Shocho said...

Shiny raven black
Brakes flashed at me like a smile
Changed lanes for exit

(Makes a crappy haiku when edited.)

Dave(id) said...

Corvette loving Chuck
Staring, drooling from his mouth
Wife slaps him awake